Cool I like it. most girls go through this through their teenage life. thanks for the review BTW. i appreciate it.

Really dark.This poem flat out tells that you are hurting and want to get even.Again Great Job

Wow.. isnt cool how you can use real situations in poems like that?
i kno its not a very good experience and im sorry
but at leats you can get ur feelings out

Thats really good. I love it