Pain

by cuttingsherpleasuredeathishergame   Nov 4, 2005


Pain is the key to shape the soul.
Happiness is the key to make the soul conform.
Death is the key that tears at the heart & kills the soul.
Life will come to be the key that opens the eyes of people.
But until the keys are formed we will continue to have a utopia.
Because without feelings there can be no pain
Or happiness or death or life...

My cousin wrote this & I wanted to know what others thought of it, so please vote &/or comment.

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  • 18 years ago

    by hopeless08

    It's very deep. I like it.

    ~hopeless~

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    Wow i am lovein deep writing good shit i am goona u that for an way message Comment back-Liz

  • Awesome!

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