Very nice poem. keep writing

Awe... what a amazing poem... it is very well expressed... extremly well done...

sammie

Hey! nicely done, i was going to write one just like that one actually - but I think yours is soo good, i can't out do that! lol. keep it up :)

Aww that was so incrediably cute! i loved it. a great read 5/5

thanks for sharing
take care
shannon

Very beautiful poem. nice job.

Hey gr8 poem. thanx 4 the comment, and i can relate to this, the only problem is that no one ever comes to hold me when i need them. oh well thats life i guess...anyway 5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

I like how it flows its cute.

Very good poem, i really liked it. Keep up the good work!

At first glance I thought the poem was gonna suck cause of the was it was so short and seemed to end with the "ight".

But it was actually good. I actually enjoyed it.

~Atomic

Wownessosity, that was a wee bit short but yet conveyed your meaning perty damn good, I liked it a lot

This poem is powerful in the sense that it really had a pleading, pained feeling to it, and the begging was etched into your word choose. The only think I didn't like as much is that I would have wanted to know why you needed to be held tight, what was wrong. To give the poem a deeper, personal meaning, that could be a good addition, but it was still a great poem. Your wrote on the want to be loved and cared for, a feeling we all know very well and you turned out a great write!

-Tainted Mikochan

Wow great job loved it
5/5

love always
tabby

That was sooo good glad you told me to read it !!! do you mind if i email it to a friend ??? oh yeah read mine it is about my BFF its called My Angel&MyBest Friend!!!love ya , Morgan

Very very good. This was well done. A very unusual rhyming scheme, but it did well. Keep up the good work!

I get your poem a bit better now, thanks. It is a great piece of work.

-Tainted Mikochan

Hey girl this is a good poem...its a little short actually its kinda like a longer version of a haiku poem however it is very well written!***

-Good Job

*Brie*

Very good! I luv it! Keep writing. 8-)

This is awesome! it fits w/ how i feel alot of da time.5/5 keep writing

Really nice it was very short though but that can sometimes be a good thing great job 4/5
aaron

Hey this poem is good. It must have been pretty hard to rhyme tight so many times. I don't really know what to say..Good poem. Keep up the good work because it's 5/5. I guess there could be a little improvements, like making the poem longer, or making it more complex. I dunno, very good work.