That's nice. i loved the way you set uped the imagery. 5/5
-Vino

Very good!

I liked it, good job!! Keep it uo the good work!! :)

This is soo true for most of us! its really good 5/5! great rite keep up the good work!

I think i felt that way, its short but powerful and meaningful, great poem

I like this poem...i know excatly how you feel

Its good. "Please hold me tight,
I'm very scared inside,
And, in depth of fright."

i'm very scared in side could be reworded,...

This is amazingly beautiful!!! i totally agree...its how i feel about my ex! u have a good rhyme scheme and it flows well...def keep up the good work! thx 4 the comment.
andi

Hey,, Great poem, well done! Great Rhyming and metre! you should be proud of this one!
Love Mel

Good work i like this poem keep wriing

I liked your rhyming scheme in this poem and it was very good. and i can relate to it, very well written

Thanks for your comment on my poem

Wow i can tottaly realate to this poem its one of the best ive seen and its straight to the point

everyone needs someone to hold them and tell them its ok sometimes especially wen we turn to cutting.

thanx for my comment i love your poem jody xx

I lik it and i do feel lik that sumtimes

Nice one

liked it