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by aaron c s
Loved the metaphor. loves is kinda like a floor. never thought of it that way. beautiful poem. |
by Ali
YES! EXACTLY BEE! sometimes i feel like the floor tile. so i totally see what you are saying great poem!!!!!! |
Hahaha........well i don't mean to laugh.....but under the sercomstances......well when i wrote this poem i was actually looking at a floor tile so it didn't have a meaning then.....or i should say.....it ddidn't until i relized that i had wrote it with out thinking.....and that those were my true feelings.....i'm a stange one i know.....gesh floor tiles...!!!! |