He is listening keep talking to him and letting him in. He will answer your prayers but maybe not in your own way. Remmeber his way is higher than are's and it is always right in the end. I use to pray for him to let me die and now he has answered it in his own way and has toally given me a passion for life. I have no doubt he has a plan for you and me. Let him do his work. Give him a chance because he will never disppoint you. He promises that as well as I do. Hang in there! |
It was great I loved it. Your really good at writing. It touched me very much. It even made me shed a tear(which I don't do very much) |
by Torn
Omg...you are a truly gifted writer..just omg!!! |
I love it...the words r so deep...keep it up...5/5 |
Damn you got some talent, I almost cried.Good Rhyming. |
by Lalala
Brill poem 5/5 |
by Lalala
Loved the poem 5/5 keep it up |
by Me
Omg. that was such a great poem it realli spoke to me u are sooo tallented and i hope u continue to write more perfect poems like this. |
by amber
Oh my dear lord in heaven. . .this is the perfect suicide poem. . of course suicide isn't the answer it's just they rhyme scheme that you have done and the words that you've used. . .it's just AMAZING! i love it. . .i could actually feel his pain and his sadness and what all he's been through. . .it's just. . .wow. . . i'm speechless (that never happens to me) your amazing |
by Ashly
Ur addicting i cant stop reading your poems. they are so true and heart felt. |
Omgsh...i cant discribe how i feel about this poem..i started to cry...5/5 |
by Vicki
Omg that was amazing!!! i got chills i have had experience with suicide and attempts and everything and this poem wow i could really connect, strong emotions!! |