I liked it alot..Liz..Cause i can relate..Guys are just jerks sometimes...YOU should read my poem MY SHATTERED HEART..cause its basiclly saying the same thing...Awesome..great write..Much Love..Joclyn

Irreparably... I had to check the dictionary for this word, lol, maybe my vocab is just too limited.

'Your handiwork is a maze of scars,
Raging over my heart'
Beautiful lines these are. These are great words linked together.

The flow is there and every line links to the other, the emotions ride by smoothly, sad, hurt, pain..I've enjoyed it.