OMG! THIS IS EXACTLY ME!!!! GEEZ! U HAVE A GR8 WRITER! u kno u n me seem 2 have a lot in common. 5/5 4 sure!
~*Who Cares?*~

All these sad poems, but you need to write with your emotions. It seems you're holding back a lot of things. Just write as you think, and sometimes it will flow nicely.