Whisper in my ear,
the callings of the wind,
catch me as I fall,
like the leaves that spin

Whisper in my ear,
the tides of the ocean
save me as I drown,
choking in slow motion.

Whisper in my ear,
the movment of the earth,
find me as I wander,
under this mezmorizing curse.

Whisper in my ear,
the sound of crackling fire,
warm me, let me burn,
forfill my desires.

i have no idea, i think it's good just how it is but like make sure it rhymes maybe? i think that would make it better i dunno i like it great job! keep writing :)
always here~
-Kit