The Tears

by Tiffani   Nov 5, 2005


The tears i cry are not for nothing...
there is always a problem in my life...
but all the tears prove to be a waste...
of all the years i could have been living....
instead of dieing, and crying...
its hard to live,
when every one is saying die...
its hard to smile....
when the world hates you....
but i do...
whenever people tell me no,
i say yes...
when people tell me go,
i say stay...
i have my own mind...
my own thoughts,
and my own dreams...
i don't need anyone telling me what to,
or what not to do...
i am going to live again...
i am going to see a light...
i will not care what people think...
i will no longer waste my 1 precious life...
i will make up for all The Tears...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffani

    ThAnX oNcE AgAiN aNgIe!!! i know lol i have a thing for the "..." i dont know why but i always have lol.

    LoTa LoVeN,,

    TiFfAnI

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Another wonderful poem. But i have a suggestion... Maybe to make it more effective you could not put as many "..." dot dot dots. Other then that it was amazingly wirtten! Never stop writing! =D 5/5
    ~Luvz~
    ~Angie~
    xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiffani

    ADEL, thank u. i am very happy to gain another fan. i love ur work also. ur amazing. ThAnKs AgAiN!!!

    Love Tiffani

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiffani

    Thank you for telling me that. im so happy my poetry can help other people thats what i write it for.

    Love,
    Tiffani

  • 19 years ago

    by paola

    I really love what you wrote .. and its true what your saying ..your being your own self that really inspires me to be myself too..

    much love ,
    paola

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