by midnight♥lullibys Nov 5, 2005
category :
Life, society /
about society
Black pedals descend from up above |
by Shaw
Touching |
by Ariana
Wow, good stuff. Your use of imagery is really nice. |
by Shadawn
I liked your poem alot. |
by BrokenMisery
Your writing has turned very cryptic and sometimes it struggles to make sense. I love the descriptions in this poem; it was really effective but try to make sure you can figure out what the poem is about other than through the title. |
Wow...this is sooo significant...5/5 keep up the great work and i love the way u expressed urself in this poem |