This is an amazing poem, you have so much talent. It is structured perfectly and flows really well. I love the concept of "icicles of pain", and the depth of emotion you have captured.
Well done! Keep writing.
*VioletRaven*

Hey em, another breath-taking work of art. i agree with VioletRaven, the icicles of pain thing is very abstract and well thought out.
keep writing hon, you rock!
-Suzie

Poetically speaking, your poems are great, but the thing i'm not a real fan of is the structure of your poems, no offence or anything, but i find the way they're set out a bit repetitive and too uniform, but hey each too their own. Try some variety. Like it or hate it, at least it's a comment.

I love the way ur rhymes match so perfect! it was way cool! i loevd it!

I love the way ur rhymes match so perfect! it was way cool! i loevd it!