Oh..that was very deep. great poem..
hope you're ok xoxo

A sad subject, but nicely written. I liked how you started it, it didn't sound dramatic but more just like what was happening was just normal.

Hey amazing.
well i could really relate to those feelings... it just spoke the same language which poems and articles speak sometimes.

Hi nitin
one more nice poem from ur side. i know u love dark poems and u can write them well too. it had a pain in it.
really i loved it. and ya thanks 4 commenting on most of my poems. well i dont write much but ur comments hav really encouraged me
i will try 4 some more good work.
take care
bharti

A love poem that starts with a desire of death. Wow... only someone like you can pull such a thing like that. Absolutely breathtaking. Loved it.

Lots of Love
Michelle

"I know the value of love
and till you live your existing life
I will wait for you above"

Such a gorgeous ending.
While i was reading i was trying to decide whether it should have been posted in the sad poem catagory..
But when i read those last lines, i saw why it belonged here.
Well done hun
5/5
*Gem*

Nitin
Love poem? Very deep and dark emotion creep throughout this poem. I was heart broken reading this...I feel bad that you were feeling like this.

sleeping tight six feet under
I think of you and die again
life was so kind to me
so kind to end this everlasting pain

Great job on portraying your feelings..Making your reader cry.
Take Care
Love Cindy