by Juls Nov 5, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The girl is walking down a path |
by ♥Leah♥
I agree about the spelling mistakes, but that could be keyboard error right? lol. but i loved this one!! keep it up. you rock, |
by Vegetable
This is very good, The rhyme worked well. The only thing I suggest is some major spelling errors that distract from the poems quality... " Happieness" and "lye". anyway other than that great work. |
by Pure Silence
Another long yet truly brill one hun:) i love the first two lines |
WOW! is all i have to say juls, just wow |
Whoa |