This poem is (Excellent) i love every line.
keep it up
Leona

Juls...... EXCELLANT!!!!!!!!..... If you ever need to talk to me, email me at my email add...... look on my profile and get it....
*HUGS JULS*

K

Wooow hunny i loved it. i think a good poet is someone who wrotes abotu things that happen to them or to tohers in real life well done i loved it
loves ya lots xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Awesome on a scale on 1 to 10 i give u a 100! gr8 work!

Wow you are some writer u have a lot of feeling and emotion into your poems!!!

Whoa
Luffed it Galfriend ;]
Nah lol it was very good

WOW! is all i have to say juls, just wow

Another long yet truly brill one hun:) i love the first two lines

The girl is walking down a path
with shadows of death above

nicely done, keep it up:)

Jenn

This is very good, The rhyme worked well. The only thing I suggest is some major spelling errors that distract from the poems quality... " Happieness" and "lye". anyway other than that great work.

I agree about the spelling mistakes, but that could be keyboard error right? lol. but i loved this one!! keep it up. you rock,