Selfish suicide

by ..::Angel of your darkness::..   Nov 5, 2005


Cold and naked
Lying on the floor
Believes she's Trapped in a world
Where she's not wanted anymore

Cool breeze from the window
Watching the rain outside
Wish it would wash
All the pain inside

But they're lying beside her
Now slowly fading away
Her boyfriend lies
Trying to get her to stay

On the other side of her body
Sits her best friend
Holding her hand
Her own life, almost at end

Above her is her mother
Crying, dying too
Even her little sister
Is doing the best she can do

But she doesn't see them
She thinks no one cares
She tries to take away her life
Because to her it isn't fair

She doesn't realise there all there
All the ones she loves
Dying with and because of her
Everything they try is not enough

So soon she takes her life away
She doesn't bother to say goodbye
She never considered people cared and were there
And how much it would hurt them if she died

If only she had looked
Just opened her eyes to see
She would see she wasn't alone
She would see her friends and family

But she didn't
And now she's gone
Her little sister left wondering
If it was her, that had done something wrong

Her boyfriend left in his room
Blood pouring on the floor
Her mother dying inside
Her friend lost forever more

How heart broken they were
And how much they tried
To keep there
Girlfriend,
Sister,
Daughter,
Friend
Alive

And now they all suffer
All because of ones girls death
She took her life away
And now they have nothing left

All because of the selfish thing she did

'Suicide is a selfish thing to do, you'll never realise just how much you hurt the ones around you, or who decided to follow in your footsteps'

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  • 16 years ago

    by Black Rose

    I need this poem so bad its not my sister that wishes to be dead its my own mother that wants to leave her children alone.

    great poem its so true only wish people that do kill them selves think its not just there life thats ending

  • 17 years ago

    by jojo88

    Love it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    This is sad=[ but very good wirting! keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Toni Ann

    My dad committed sucide and every day I wonder what it would be like to have him by my side. But I don't get that chance. He died too cuz he thought no one cared but if you look around there are tons of people still hurting over him and he changed my life forever it has been 11 years almost 12 so it has been a long time but I still wonder why he did that to me when I was only 5
    ~Toni Ann~

  • 18 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    This is an amazing poem
    just like all your others...
    you have an amazig talent and i envy you very much=]
    i read this and thought about everything and ir made me feel a tinnie bit better =']
    keep writing your amazing =']
    LoveLoveAlice

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