I liked this poem, it was a godd subject to write about. The way you wrote it and the words you used were what made the poem great. keep it up. vik x

I love the way you wrote this. When people think of suicide they tend to think the person has inflicted the harm on themselves but nearly in every case it is because someone has hurt them! THANKS for this piece... beautiful and true more than anything! 5/5! Tess xoxo

Omg:S
so much emotion and so true..wow...
i dont really know wat t say, i guess im still in awe.
I really loved the visual this gave me...
ur awesome xoxox 5

Wow... very interesting. loved it.

- Awesome poem I liked it a lot. Keep writing you rock! -

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WOW! I don't know where to begin that was an amazing poem! It was very very deep and I just loved it! Keep writing you're very talented!
~Sammy

Wow hun this is brilliant like basically all of your poems! i love how everything you write has meaning xox

Amazing poem. its good to criticize yourself, but to say ur not a good poet is a drastic misevaluation on your part.
u have some serious talent and u should continue writing. i give you a 5/5.
great poem

Oh my god this is soooo good...keep up the great work...i just love the way that u write and tha way that u express urself....5/5 by the way

You've lost me a couple of times in this poem, some part of the poem were too forced, and I know you have the capabilities to do better.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Great poem i loved it!!!!!!!