I thought my eyes were finally dry,
that i have cried all the tears i can cry,
but then you came
and nothing felt the same, you say you have a girlfriend,
but soon it will end,
i have moved on to you,
and great thing is you like me too,
we have known each other for a long time now,
but i never saw that way some how.
when your lips met mine for the first time,
i knew that i had to make you mine,
thinking of you is all i ever do,
and it hurts you say you have to think things through.
i want it to be just you and me,
she cant love you like i can why cant you just see.
Hey this was very good....
I could deffinetly feel the emotion in which you wrote. The rhyme scheme was ok, but your formating could use a little work...over-all it was very good.