by myshiningstar14 Nov 5, 2005
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
I'VE BEEN THROUGH PAIN, ALMOST GONE INSANE; AND THE THOUSAND TEARS THAT HAVE DAMPENED MY WOODEN TEXTURE, HAVE MADE ME STRONGER. I STAND TALL AND PROUD, MY MEANING HEARD NICE AND LOUD. AS I, LEAN AGAINST THE WALL MY EYES WATCH HIM AS HE HEALS THE SICK, CURES THE WOUNDED, AND PROCLAIMS HIS LOVE. |
by Tripp
AHHH MY EYES!!!!!! please dont EVER write in all caps again ;-) haha. other than that, this was an excellent poem. I'm not close to a religious person, but this spoke to me, and evoked feelings. great imagery too. keep it up =] |
Im not sure if the caps have meanin..so i really cant say anything but as poetry goes...Nice job Really Graet i love your line |
Thaxns hunn:) |