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I like this. I must say that it IS hard to tell someone you love them. However, if they didn't love you back why would you want them around? If they walk away because you confess your true feelings (whether or not they feel the same way) they are cowards. I say tell them...everything happens for a reason so if they walked away it was the right thing...I love how you wrote of your uncertainty. "Im scared of rejection.
Im in need of protection." those we my favorite lines as I think they depict what so many people feel at some point in their lives...Nicely done!

This was good the form was a little weird, but it was still good, i really liked the idea because it's a feeling a lot of people feel so it's very relatable, and the way you worded everything was very good as well great job 5/5

That was a really nice poem. I hope you’re ok, love is weird it hurts us more then anything and it rewords us too. Check out some of my poems when you get a change and keep writing no matter what anyone tells you.

Thats a good question u ask... but u know what ur love would not change whether they love u or not...so u just tell them :-)
gr8 piece
5/5
love
amy

Aww hun I can really relate to this.. This was an amazing poem.. 5/5

This is so good, and believe it or not I can relate so well to this. I'm oing through something similar right now. The way I figure it, the only way to get the answers you're seeking is to ask the source. It's a risk, but sometimes risks are well worth the effort. Excellent poem!

Wow this is perfect for what's going on in my life right now.

Its seriously perfect.