Cute i think the feelins coudl be deeper here though..but good structure. look foward to reading more of your poetry.

LISSA

Aww........That is soo cute! omg wen i read like da 1st couple lines of ur poem...it hella reminded of ME!! i am going through diz rite now! aw.. grll dat hella made my day..(in a way) bcuz he still aint my "baby" but he's a REALLY good friend!

**Plz read n comment/rate....my poems!! THX!! :)

HEY THX 4 UR COMMENT I REALLY APPRECIATE IT!!! :) ...OH AND SOME OF MY POEMS "R REAL!!"