by Atomic Nov 6, 2005
category :
Life, society /
about society
Our family has so little, |
Excellent work...5/5 |
by Darien
Your rhymes are so good, I wish I could write like that. Your poetry has a really nice structure to it, all of my poems are different, and they are all over the place. I could never be consistant with my writing, which is sad. Oh well, maybe you can teach me to be good :P hehe |
by Lu
We don't have a lot of much, |
by Anthony
Hey Ato-chan. This really blossomed from the part you read me earlier! Great job! My favorite lines were: |