A Picnic To Remember

by Ann Stareyes   Nov 6, 2005


The breeze softly blowing
The sun beginning to set
We planned our picnic at the park
One I knew we'd never forget.

We snuggled under the stars
And I kissed your sweet lips
I threw out the blanket
I was surely losing grip.

We sat and reminisced
For all the time we lost
You always were my heart
Regardless of what life tossed.

Our meal now before us
Fried Chicken and Baked beans too
Chocolate meringue pie
That was just as sweet as you.

Then we created a new recipe
Love filled with desire
Added a whole lot of passion
That drove us completely wild.

We gazed upon the stars
I feed you with delight
Then came those sweet candy kisses
I hated to say good bye.

This picnic was a blast
As we exited under the moon
Now forever in each others heart
Love that will prosper and bloom...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey ann, your work really inspires me. I hope i can write as good as you one day. It is such a beautifully written piece! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by [She.Falls.Asleep]

    Aww that poem was so gorgeous. It was so cute and lovely, and it made me remember the Summer... :). Always a good thing! Anyway, I really liekd the poem. I thought it was very well written.

    Take Care, Elle x

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    "We sat and reminisced
    For all the time we lost
    You always were my heart
    Regardless of what life tossed."

    love those lines! you did a great job with this topic, i thought it sounded hard. but you did a beautiful job with it! i like your writings

    ~Jacklyn

  • 19 years ago

    by dora

    0h w0w what a beautiful p0em. such t0uching lines. well d0ne! i really ;like it. me n harry went 0n 0ur picnic f0r 0ur 6 m0nths l0lz =) neway great j0b 0n this p0em!
    l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra

  • 19 years ago

    by Lu

    That was truly amazingly beautiful ...Ann
    God I can't wait for summer to come back around .....I love picnics ...
    Your first stanza really set the mood ...

    I think tomorrow night I will have a picnic under the soft gentle breeze
    * of my living room ceiling fan * with candles as my stars .....LMAO ....
    Then again romance is what you make it .... I really do miss summer's romantic picnics ....
    You really did kick
    butt with this one....
    I loved it !!!!!

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