That was truly amazingly beautiful ...Ann
God I can't wait for summer to come back around .....I love picnics ...
Your first stanza really set the mood ...

I think tomorrow night I will have a picnic under the soft gentle breeze
* of my living room ceiling fan * with candles as my stars .....LMAO ....
Then again romance is what you make it .... I really do miss summer's romantic picnics ....
You really did kick
butt with this one....
I loved it !!!!!

0h w0w what a beautiful p0em. such t0uching lines. well d0ne! i really ;like it. me n harry went 0n 0ur picnic f0r 0ur 6 m0nths l0lz =) neway great j0b 0n this p0em!
l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra

"We sat and reminisced
For all the time we lost
You always were my heart
Regardless of what life tossed."

love those lines! you did a great job with this topic, i thought it sounded hard. but you did a beautiful job with it! i like your writings

~Jacklyn

Aww that poem was so gorgeous. It was so cute and lovely, and it made me remember the Summer... :). Always a good thing! Anyway, I really liekd the poem. I thought it was very well written.

Take Care, Elle x

Hey ann, your work really inspires me. I hope i can write as good as you one day. It is such a beautifully written piece! :)