To the never ending battle,
Life.
I think it would sound better if you changed this to "to the never ending battle called life" or "to the never ending battle of life"
i need of the image
I don't get that, is it a typo?
when i don't her the beat
hear, right?
nice job, it's very unique and has a lot of truth to it. 4/5

O god. *holds back emotion* really good ali! loved it! and i didn't cry! ha!

Nice description of time slipping away.
Jez