I love it, it just represent exatly how I felt when my dad left.
Thanks for the comment, I give you a 5 for this!
Take care and keep up the good work.

Wow, powerful, you made me wonder about this line 'maybe right doesn't equal happiness'. It's kind of true. You voice out a situation happens so frequently in our lives, thanks for penning it down, where I can relate to. lol. Back to the poem, the use of puzzle to describe life is great, and the way you did it, wonderful! But I feel that here or there, somehow, the flow is disturbed a little. Maybe it's just me, if that is so, ignore me. :) Anyway, great write.

Their are always little cracks in the puzzle. and sometimes we lose hole pieces...i liked the poem