Good poem. The 1st three lines were my favorite

Real great

Awwwww i like this poem so much that i can read it ova and ova and i wont get sick of it.

"pull me closer
and hold me tightly
lift my head and tilt it slightly
take these lips and do it fast,
please stay with me here
and make the moment evalasting"

love these lines..........u knw how to use those words......keep it up 5/5