Hey Dan. i know i said i wasn't gonna write good comments..... but that was totally rockin'!!! i liked the ending.....
rock on, man. rock on
-Suzie

I hope that you dont mean anything literaly about that cause Id miss you too much
another good poem

Hey, that was a really powerful poem, hope you don't feel like this all the time though. Stick around and keep writing, cause I love your stuff and it would be a great loss if you stopped. Thanks for your comments,
*VioletRaven*

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Thankyou for your time
Matt

That was awsome. And Im with you on the " Long live Manson " Hes the coolest. But that poem had so much into it. Darker stuff is always better. I think. But you got alot into it. It was awsome. You should check out some of mine sometime.

- Ali