Thanks 4 all ur comments it is very much appreciated.

5/5 good poem i like it it flowwed without to much ryming

Girl I know what you are saying because them boys is something else out there, they think you will always be there to forgive them what they did, Anyways, good poems!!!!

Ok I wont. Its good and I like the lines in it. I will never be the victim of the game...I will be the master of it...ok I wont but its good.