by ♥Madison Meeks♥ Nov 6, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Bottled up inside, the words i never said, the feelings that i had, the lines you never read.You can see it in my eyes, read it on my face, trapped inside your lies, of the past i cant repeat.With memories that linger, wont seem to go away, why cant i be happier, todays a brand new day.Yesterdays are over, even though the hurtings not, nothings forever, i must cherish what i got.Don't take my love for granted, for soon it will be gone, all you ever wanted, of the love you thought you'd want.The hurt I'm feeling now wont disappear over night, but someway somehow, everything will turn out alright.No more wishing for the past, it wasn't meant to be, It didn't seem to last, so i have to set him free. |
by obsessedgurl
That is really good and i can tell that it was heartfelt!!!! |
by creeesta
Good job, i liked the way you used the words :) |
by Fadedstar
Aww that is a reallyy good poem!! |
Very interesting poem...I like it...especially the first line. |
Nicely done, as for making it bettererer might want to format it so its not one big string of words =) other than that, nicely done |