by myshiningstar14 Nov 6, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
The thought of loosing you, makes me shake with fear, the tears have become so intense, that i cannot stop shaking, and i can scarcely breath! I don't know what i did, but i need you...and i am so BROKEN. |
Nice job...just gotta start with those stanza's we got some hardcore critique ppl so..im just tryen to help you attract more readers..but the poem was nice really great 5/5 |
by Aly
Oh my gee! your so good! yeah for school we had to do a poem unit and i sent into the Celebration of Young Poets and my poem, Winter, got published...lol so did some other form my shcool...i think like 29 of us? o well! ttyl suger!! thanks for the comments!!! |
This is based on the time i almost thought i lost john as a friend...bc of sumthn he did i thought i was never gonna be able to talk to him again...and it hurt so i wrote this poem..i love him, so damn much adn i hope you all can tell even though you don't kno me. Lissa xox |
Awwesome hunn |