Awwesome hunn

This is based on the time i almost thought i lost john as a friend...bc of sumthn he did i thought i was never gonna be able to talk to him again...and it hurt so i wrote this poem..i love him, so damn much adn i hope you all can tell even though you don't kno me. Lissa xox

Oh my gee! your so good! yeah for school we had to do a poem unit and i sent into the Celebration of Young Poets and my poem, Winter, got published...lol so did some other form my shcool...i think like 29 of us? o well! ttyl suger!! thanks for the comments!!!

Nice job...just gotta start with those stanza's we got some hardcore critique ppl so..im just tryen to help you attract more readers..but the poem was nice really great 5/5
ttyl somtetime
~The Poet~