by firexflys Nov 6, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I'm sitting here with you on my mind |
by Sole
Your poetry is all so sweet and loving, or most of them are anyway, they all have the same feeling of need for that special person, and the feeling that if they leave - there will be nothing left in the world. I love the way you have structured this poem, and the way the rhyme and rhythm varies slightly :) |
by dora
Heyy great j0b 0n this 0ne t0o. a hyeartfelt piece 0nce again. great w0rk!! |
by CE
10/5 this is a very good poem I love it |
by Mezmeryz
Great poem...real sweet! keep it up..i luv ur poems theyre so good..keep it up!!:) |
Well done another great poem. |