Oh wow! This is amazing, just absolutely brilliant! The emotion conveyed is startling and the ending....beyond words! This is definitely one of your best.
Oh and the title, very nice! Keep it up~Holly

The poem caught my attention the durng the first line and it kept it till the end. This is indeed a very good poem, go Anthony!

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Awesome poem, keep it up.
and I'm sorry that you're so depressed :(
but you're writing is really good.
alyssa