Forgiven

by amber   Nov 6, 2005


When will it stop?
When will the pain go away?
Why did it happen?
When did it start?
I know you just told me
To help me
Now your asking me to forgive you
Can I?
To me your dead and I can't see
I dont understand
Why you said it or
Why it happened
I know it did
I regret it
I dont want a baby
I dont want you
I'm asking you to forgive me
Help me save me
Love me protect me
And never ever leave

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  • 19 years ago

    by marinecorps0405

    I would like to correct my previous statement. repetitive wasnt the word i wanted to use. u reiterated some pts. a couple times using the same words. in the future i would recommend using a different wording if u want to repeat the same question. it keeps the flow of the poem going.

  • 19 years ago

    by marinecorps0405

    Very emotional poem. some of your wording was a bit repetitive. i like the message your putting out there though.
    all in all a very decent poem.
    4/5

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