Very emotional poem. some of your wording was a bit repetitive. i like the message your putting out there though.
all in all a very decent poem.
4/5

I would like to correct my previous statement. repetitive wasnt the word i wanted to use. u reiterated some pts. a couple times using the same words. in the future i would recommend using a different wording if u want to repeat the same question. it keeps the flow of the poem going.