Reality's Rage

by Koriey Korrupted   Nov 6, 2005


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The resolve burns within her soul
and corrups the destruction that binds the light
just to return to never ending darkness
that only disapears on a moonless night

the past rewinds and the memories replay
casting in shame God's creation
demonic emotions reaping their future mistakes
because the wars continue by the passing sun

Vampires roam and humans kill
as monsters within reality
but beyond this world imaginary
that only the lost can see

strongholds bound all senses
think twice of what you touch
we no longer rely on what we witness
because suicide allows as much

heaven and hells war will end
and all faces will sink
never to know the mystery
of deception the missing link

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    It is a good poem. I liked your choice of words. you are very talented. Keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I HAVE NO CLUE WHAT UR TALKING ABOUT BUT I KNOW TALENT WHEN I READ IT ; JUST THE WAY THE LINES FLOW WOWWWWWWWWWWW
    I LOVE EVERY WORD YOU WRITE
    AND I WOULD LIVE ANY MISERABLE
    EXISTANCE JUST TO WRITE LIKE YOU
    TAKE POETRY CLASSES AND PURSUE AND CAREER IN WRITING YOU GOT WHAT IT TAKES. NO B/S I HAVE NOTHING TO GAIN TELLING YOU THIS SO YOU KNOW IT MUST BE TRUE,

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Good, good. i really like the lines 'that only disapears on a moonless night' and 'the past rewinds and the memories replay' but i can't figure out my favorite stanza...sorry.

    Brad

    P.S. i'm hoping you'll tell me the absolute truth. were my poems better before? recently they seem like they're lacking something

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