Wow... im at a loss for words... that actually did bring tears to my eyes... that was great, fantastic even... ... im tryin hard to catch my breath...

comment on my work too plz...

kk

Incredible...it draws a terribly sad picture about this young girl's life and there are many people who are going through the exact same thing. I am very impressed and I hope to see more poems with this quality written by you. This one definitely deserves a 5/5! luv always, kt