Really really good. Honest and straight forward. Your words flow perfectly!

Great!! i feel the same but i have to email you more info on my ex!!!!

You know i love this boy and his name is luis and well we go to the same school and we talk on and off and we play around sometimes u know intimetly but one day i saw him holding somegurls hand,even though it killed me inside that day i still luv him becuz i dont know how to stop so this poem is very similar to how i feel and what i'm going through

I really love this poem i can totally relate to it....

A very nice poem! cute and touching all at the same time! You're a very talented writer!
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I like your poems, they are pretty simple but touch my heart so much....I liked this one especially