So What?

by Ike Dizzle   Nov 7, 2005


So what?

So she has a boy friend,
So what,
You said you would like her to the very end,
So what
Are you going to cry about it?
So what
Are you going to submit?
So what
She doesnt see you care her?
So what
This is unfair
So what
So you think Im mean
So what
Im saying this because its something Ive been through and seen
And?
Im trying to prove a point
And that is?
No one is worth taking yourself to gunpoint

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  • 16 years ago

    by Splashley

    Awwh, Isaac..I love reading your poems. They are so cute, and amazing..and you rock monkey faces..and yeahh..hehe...ya gotta love your dorky friends..lol...but this is an awesome poem..i rated you 5/5.

    P.S.
    please comment some of mine, i got lots of new ones. :] thanks.

    much love.
    Ashley. <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I think if the lines between the 'So What's were the same length, the piece would flow a little better. The piece, for me, didn't hold too much water, I didn't really get anything from it, no real emotion, story, power, etc.

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Yup... make sense to kno.. L:-DL.. This is niceee, love it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Goes straight to the point! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Moose

    See, this was a little too repetitve for my taste, but at the very end you made a good point, and if I wasn't suicidal myself I probably wouldve given this another 4. But you did good. The conversation between yourself in the poem was a big part of it. Weird form but it works huh? Look it over a few times, edit it, we might have a new fav authour on the site here.

    5/5
    Bryce

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