Comments : My Demise

  • 19 years ago

    by master of shadow

    That is a superb poem. it flows really well. dont know why no ones commented before.

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Wow, this is really great. I know how this feels, well done for putting it down in words.
    Thank you for your comment on my poem as well.
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Hey, I'm not usually a fan of the cutting poems, but I really liked this one. Some of the words you used really added the affect to your imagery and the feeling of it was really well sent aswell. Excellent job, no complaints from me.

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Wow, I liked the last part that was excellently written, all of it was, you're an excellent writer, all should aspire to put as much emotion into there writing as you have in the last four I've read

  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    Loved it and can really relate in a way.
    Great job

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Another beautiful poem indeed... ur in my favs list !! : )

  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    I like it. It's deep. It's unique. It's 5/5
    -Vino