That is a superb poem. it flows really well. dont know why no ones commented before. |
by VioletRaven
Wow, this is really great. I know how this feels, well done for putting it down in words. |
by Void
Hey, I'm not usually a fan of the cutting poems, but I really liked this one. Some of the words you used really added the affect to your imagery and the feeling of it was really well sent aswell. Excellent job, no complaints from me. |
by Alex Marlatt
Wow, I liked the last part that was excellently written, all of it was, you're an excellent writer, all should aspire to put as much emotion into there writing as you have in the last four I've read |
Loved it and can really relate in a way. |
by amelia
Another beautiful poem indeed... ur in my favs list !! : ) |
by Ike Dizzle
I like it. It's deep. It's unique. It's 5/5 |