Jemma~
I think I liked this poem the best! You are a good poet. I immediatly knew how you felt after reading this! good job!
ashley b

ALMOST ALL THE POEMS YOU WRITE I CAN RELATE TO!!!!!!!!EVERY NIGHT I HAVE ADREAM ABOUT THIS BOY I REALLY LIKE AND I WISH THEY COULD COME TRUE

Dreams like those are the best. The only thing is that I cant stand waking up and knowing that it all didnt happen and wont...:( so sad, but keep up the good work.

I can relate to the dreams. I used to love to fall asleep just so that I wouldn't have to deal with reality for a little while and I could see someone whom I was missing. I thought that the poem could've been a lttle better though. That will come with more time and experience though.

great poem. i can relate to this poem. keep up the good work

Ashley