Hey, really nice. I liked the bit about running from your past, that was very nice.
EXCELLENT JOB!!

Good Writing!
beth

I loved the message in this poem. It was a very well written poem.

Interesting, I don't quite understand it but I'm guessing you're using the shoes as a kinda representation of your life?
I like how this piece is quite abstract but very controlled, everything fits in with another.

GOSH girl!! cant even begin to describe the feelings this poem had in me.. it was so deep and heart-felt.. very profound.. it reli made me think bout lots of things, especially those we take 4 granted... i like ur description of the shoe and ur title was very attractive.. dun ask :P
but i reli lyk this..
from me a 5
keep up the talent
ur gr8
take care
NannO