I like how you turned such a cliche topic into something so wonderful to read of.

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Very well written....images of the video for the song Jeremy kept running through my mind...you took a topic that has been beat to death and put a new spin on it. Good job.

This is a very good poem./ the descriptions are great and although this tiopic has been done many times before it seemed new and unique.