And Pain Currently

by CinnamonTwirl   Nov 7, 2005


Forever it seemed...
Forever it felt...
Forever it was...
Forever it could...
While cliche, forever ended so soon
But too soon is the question
And "too soon" I'm not certain
Once certain and sure of what she wanted
I'm confused and quiet, head hung low
Low because I'm guilty
Guilt because I'm vile
But dont realize Im vile
Until loved-ones do
And thus guilt resurfaces again
Guilt leading to pain
And pain currently
...Im sorry...

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I wrote this one before me and my boyfriend are now on a \"break\"...and I dunno, I cant really explain it cause I\'m bad at that, but, yea....take it for what it is. Comments are appreciated, as always, love yall.

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  • 19 years ago

    by shadowlight

    Like this poem the emotion comes accross but isn't overpowering. very good

  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    Wow, whoever rated this a lower thena 5 is out of their minds, you are seriously one of the most talented writers i've come across, you for sure better then average but your not like complicated like some of the authors on here that have books and stuff so your amazing but i can understand everything i really liked that a lot, this poem is my favorite out of the three i've read, i loved how you let one sentence flow into the next it all just worked so well together

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