Wow, whoever rated this a lower thena 5 is out of their minds, you are seriously one of the most talented writers i've come across, you for sure better then average but your not like complicated like some of the authors on here that have books and stuff so your amazing but i can understand everything i really liked that a lot, this poem is my favorite out of the three i've read, i loved how you let one sentence flow into the next it all just worked so well together

Like this poem the emotion comes accross but isn't overpowering. very good