by JAY Poet Nov 7, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I said to myself |
by dora
0h hun t0uching lines. very em0ti0nal. g0od j0b |
by Torn
Hey hun..the first verse was a bit hard to read but the overall emotion of the poem was amazing. |
by Delanea
Great!!!!!!!!! |
Aww hun, the last verse got me the most because I can relate to it a lot wow amazing work here, well done |
by TinyDancer46
*Speechless* This sums up exactly how I feel right now... in fact I'm almost crying right now!! That is a great poem, your writing never seizes to amaze me!! 5/5 |