Promises

by Little Dot   Nov 7, 2005


You promise to spend time with me
Instead you spend time with her
You promise to take me fishing
Instead you go fishing with the guys
You promise to teach me Arabic
Instead you go into the city
You keep promising things to me
And you keep taking them away
When will you come through for me
On all these broken promises
And my broken heart

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  • 19 years ago

    by Darien

    Hmm, there is a lot of stuff missing in this poem, I really think you need to write some more stuff. Have a nice beginning and end. Don't worry, this is really good for someone your age. Keep trying. :)