I love this poem it made me cry your words are so wonderful

Holy cow! That was awesome! I felt so connected with that poem! You did GREAT! It deserves a 5/5 definitely!!! AWESOME! KEEP IT UP!!!

I think its really cool how god has a part in such a meaningful poem!! your really talented!!

This is a great poem! very beautiful! keep up your great work! take care. :)

This is beautiful. I love that you made it clear that God knows everything about our wants and needs and that he will fulfill them. Keep up the great writing