by Kevin McNulty Dec 12, 2003
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Special events /
other poems
(there will come a time in every man's life where he will be held accountable for his actions) |
Now this is truly brilliant poem- i've often wondered what would it would be like, if jugement day ever happened and i think you're poem is probably very close to the anwser. your're really talented and once agian thanx for the nice comments about my poems. uh and no i didn't write "Does heaven have a phone number" but i wished i had. its my favorite poem, thats why i put it up. anyways i better stop babbling xmollyxx |
by N J Thornton
Great poem. You write with emotions and give views that not many people consider or write about, i respect this. I myself don't beleive in a god as such either. Very well done, you deffinatly have talent. |
by Andrea
The actual poem was really good. You have a great talent for writing, although I have to agree with AI's comment. I don't believe in god, etc, and I like the fact that you portrayed him as a slave-driving, power-hungry madman, so great job. |
Awesome Kevin....absolutely amazing! there's a one of mine I'd like you to read...and comment on, if you will... "The Apppointment" (well, and any of them! LOL) |
by topoke
I tried to write a poem on this same sort of line about 5 years ago, and left it unfinished and eventually abandoned it, as it wasn't good, and I found it very hard to progress with. And that is why I take my hat off to you Kevin for writing this wonderful piece of work. |